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Beautiful and inspiring

Now this flash was absolutely beautiful, I found it uplifting to my soul. Your artwork is absolutely incredible, the people are very life-like in their faces and bodies. The music of course fit perfectly. I also love how you made all different kinds of people, living their lives in all different ways, and I couldn't help but feel so sorry for the ones who were miserable, and yet be inspired by the ones who were happy. My favorite, is definately the catholic priest, though I am not catholic, he inspires get more in tune with my spiritual side and to help the lost souls of this world, to me he represented peace and contentment, spiritual enlightenment, and hope in the midst of great sadness, there is just something so peaceful and reassuring in his face.

In any case I rate this flash highly not only because it is so well done on the technical side, but because it inspire me on an emotional and spiritual level, it is truly a flash from the heart.

Disappointing but decent

This was a pretty good flash, I really enjoyed your artwork, you really made the characters look like real people, I think you definately have talent as an animator and artist. This music also in my opinion fit perfectly. What disappointed me is that you said that you made this flash a detailed profile and story about these two kids and what happened that day. This was at best a very small glimpse into their lives before it happened, and even at that a very blurry one. All you really learn about these kids from your flash is that they liked NBK, played video games, and allegedly had a marilyn manson backpack (oh yeah and one of them got punched in the face one time). Nothing is learned or explained about their real feelings or about the lives of these kids, nothing is learned about their motives other than violent video games and movies, in fact you do not much their facination with nazism or the fact that they made their plans right in the school everyday, speaking to each other in German in the hallways.

This is too short, and therefore very confusing, and quite frankly not that moving, I think more thought could have gone into the actual story...but otherwise good job.

By far the best flash I've ever seen...

I have browsed newgrounds for years, and today I signed up for an account just because I wanted to review this submission. I am absolutely stunned and blown away by your talent, the artwork, the sound, the animation, the story, even the music fit perfectly with the scenes...everything was awesome. If I was a TV executive (which unfortunately I'm not) I would probably offer you a contract to make a show series (which would be awesome to see). I must say it is refreshing to see so much hardwork, creativity, and even passion go into something for entertainment and story-telling. You really have talent and should keep up the good work, congrats on an awesome and welldone flash.

The only complaint I really have is the voice acting could have been done *slightly* better, but it's still pretty good, and I'm glad you brought in new talent and voices for your characters. In any case excellent job, and please make an episode 5!!!

I'm David B. Beaver, and sadly I am not an animator, artist, i am fair musician with the right software, but rarely deal in music. I am a writer and you can find much of my work at http://worldofdiamic .com/ or my Facebook page worldofdiamic

Age 36, Male

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