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meh

could be better could be worse. Graphics could've been done much better, the music was ok at first but got annoying after awhile, it all started out really good and I loved the overall story and message you conveyed, but it just didn't impress that much...nice flash all in all, but again it could be better...

not too bad...

The artwork was a little weird but I could get used to it, I also had a hard time seeing the symbolism but I got it, overall this could've been better but it wasn't too bad, nice job. Excellent choice of song BTW.

On a side note, i must ask, which do you really think is worse, individualism, or conformity?

AloneInTheDark responds:

Well, i didn't really meant individualism in the context of expressing one self, because that certainly is a good thing. I meant it more as a lifestyle where someone is too occupied with him/herself and not really caring for whats going around in the world

actually...

I thought this pretty good, no the music may not have been original but it totally fit the scene and I liked it, this is very welldone, good job.

not bad I guess

Well it was better than corporate puppet that's for sure, I notice you have a very surreal way of doing your flashes which seems artistic and mysterious, and in a way I kind of like it, but in a way it is annoying, I'm just stuck somewhere between. Anyways all in all the flash was pretty decent, the music was actually picked well this time, but it was just too dang confusing, wtf was going on?? Anyways, this was better than corporate puppet but still needs work...

very nice

I actually really like this one (after wathcing it for the third time) for its absolutely stunning scenery, the visual and nature effects are amazing. You put a lot of work into everything from the rain and the waterfall, to more subtle visuals like the king's reflection on the window, that's what I love about this one. What I regret is that you seem to stray away from this in the next two, why abandon the hard work you put into scenery, that was like one of the best things about this flash.

The only complains about this one though are poor sound quality (it was very hard to understand characters once or twice) and misspelled captions, but that was pretty funny. Overall (as always) very welldone.

I liked it...

It did kind of appeal to me, definately good for an introduction, you did very well on explaining the history and showing cool scenes to go with it...good job.

ok...

I hated the music selection and I didn't like how you didn't really show anything blowing up, like I wanted to the zerg get killed and the ships blow up but everytime something was destroyed you changed scenes or incorporated a bright light to cover it up, this seemed like a cop-out on making what could've been some cool animation. I also couldn't really follow the plot very well, what happened? The zerg wanted to infest some beast so now they have to help protoss destroy it?? am I right? anyways other than that it was pretty good...

LogFish responds:

Yea that's what happened - the zerg managed too.
I mean to get a newer version of flash so I can do better special effects, blurs and things - at the moment MX is a bit limiting and that's evident in this one, something I mean to work on.

nice

I actually really liked this, you did really good on artwork and everything, the only thing i didn't like was I thought the sound and music could have been better quality, and I was a little confused on what was going in the story...I also liked how when you're reading the introduction you could tell it to continue when you were done reading, as opposed to most flashes where you either have to speed read to get the plot, or sit there for five minutes after you're done reading.

This was all good...nice job

I'm David B. Beaver, and sadly I am not an animator, artist, i am fair musician with the right software, but rarely deal in music. I am a writer and you can find much of my work at http://worldofdiamic .com/ or my Facebook page worldofdiamic

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